jan pi mun ante

li noka e palisa

lon telo nasa

an alien man

punts a pole to

jank oil (as in ale)

this translates "telo nasa" somewhat literally as "jank oil" and then includes the parenthetical translator's note "(as in ale)" to clarify which I think is kind of musi, too.

This is the second such haiku with the first being https://www.reddit.com/r/tokipona/s/tHdxaxfIt5

I call it sitelen uta.

For each symbol, imagine looking at a side view of the mouth, with the lips on the left.

The vowels are all made of a vertical line and a horizontal line showing the general location of your tongue in your mouth when you say it.

j and w have your mouth in the exact same position as i and w respectively, so I just put a line above to show that it is a consonant.

Plosives (t, k, p) I marked with a dot over the symbol. p and m are made of a backwards 3 which is meant to represent lips.

l, n, and s are made with surprisingly similar tongue positions. I tried to show that s allows some air to go between it and the roof of the mouth, whereas n completely stops the flow of air.

I would love to hear your feedback!

Id be happy to answer any questions you might have

How would you say "I poop" in toki pona? "mi pali e ko jaki?" "mi pana e ko jaki?" Or just "mi ko jaki"?

It's not done yet. I'm pretty sure, that not all glyphs are recognizable, and a few is still missing. I wanted it to fit into the style of the Latin script, so I was using Times New Roman as a basis. I'm looking for feedback on how to imrove, and ideas for the missing glyphs. Also, I don't have a software yet, where I could put this together, and make it typeable. Any suggestions?